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Animated Atrocities Crouching Courtney Hidden Owen

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Also, Harold's LeShawna Jr. Plot. Thank you BeekerMaroo777 for reminding me! I specifically blocked it from my mind because it was so stupid!

But again, my main problem with this episode lies between Courtney and Beth. Courtney's bending over backwards just to get Beth to get in an alliance with her, mainly because Lindsay left in the previous episode. Beth is rejecting her advances, understandable, only to make an offer herself to form an alliance. So what was the point of that plot?! Also, more proof that "Brady" is real...let me explain what's particularly wrong with this plot:
  1. Beth never brought up Brady at all until "Masters of Disasters". Until then, she lets Justin flirt with her.
  2. She mentions him in almost every episode since then, as well as appear to make up unlikely qualities about him. (More evidence that she made him up to make Justin jealous)
  3. In this episode, she leaves Courtney to fend for herself against a jellyfish and an octopus while she chats it up with him on her PDA.
  4. In the next episode, she's flirting with Harold, while still knowing she's in a relationship with Brady!
  5. With his reveal to be officially real in the Fourth Aftermath, any and all likeability I had for Beth is gone, with the aforementioned actions making her look like a bitch and, if any of what she said was true, Brady look like a Gary Stu, à la Brad! (:iconmlpflashsentryplz:) The only difference is that Brady isn't a waifu stealer. (Seriously, who would want Beth as a waifu? No offense.)
Look, writers: you wanna make your antagonist (Courtney) look bad? Start by making your protagonist (Beth) look good in comparison! You made it work in other seasons:
  • Total Drama Island: Heather (Bullet; Red) & Gwen (Bullet; Blue)
  • Total Drama World Tour: Alejandro (Bullet; Red) and Heather (Bullet; Blue)
Yeah, I know I only listed those two: only because in every succeeding season, the protagonist is either unclear (in Revenge's and Pahkitew's case) or looked as bad as, if not worse, than the antagonist (in All-Star's case)

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Didn't Owen feel guilt when he first told the audience why he's back. And his guilt is also clearly shown during the beginning of 2008: A space Owen and HE NEEDED THE MONEY FOR HIS FAMILY AND THIS IS STILL MAINLY ON CHRIS! THE REAL BAD GUY! (And Courtney in this season)

Also about what Chris said that splitting Duncan and Harold's  truce is what the audience wants, WELL as a audience member I telling you right now THAT IT WAS REFRESHING AND INTRESTING TO SEE DUNCAN AND HAROLD GET ALONG!!!